Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take an interest in the arts?

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art

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society,

however

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the value of

art

is disappeared for most individuals until today. Because of that, their mind changed to some modernized fields of life.

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essay will examine the main cause of

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of interest

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art

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solution to

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appreciation

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an appreciation

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for

art

are modernized jobs and

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lifestyle

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of individuals. People are living in the technologically developed period,

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people

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the people

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are interested in working in updated jobs

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which create the perfect condition to use

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artificial appliances.

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humans

all time

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passing at their work which they can earn enough money for living. For

such

kind of reasons, people’s interests are

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for

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art works

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. Some possible

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to

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problem are involving the people

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advertisement

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and

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the

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art

subjects in the

school

curriculum. When government produce some adverts about

art works

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artworks

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on the television or

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, it would be beneficial to make some curiosity

on

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the

individuals

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mind.

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government

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must

to

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put

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art

as

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a

school

subject to make them

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which can be enough to

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of their life. To conclude, having too much interest

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artificial devices have an extremely huge impact to mitigate the curiosity for

art

,

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we can make sufficient enthusiasm by putting

ads

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up ads

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about

art

and joining

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art

as

school

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a school

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subject.