3. Some people think that having a set retiremnt age (e.g 65 years) for everyone, regardless off occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retiremnent? –
It is a thorny issue in today's society if the
retirement
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age
should be the same for all workers or if it should differ depending on the type of each profession. I agree with the latter and I think that especially people doing hard and unhealthy Use synonyms
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will benefit more.
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everyone else. If Change preposition
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this
won't happen, many people will suffer and far-reaching implications will follow them till the end of their life.
I reckon that there are some types of Linking Words
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that require putting huge effort and your life in danger. To underpin the previous argument, the following example can be provided. There are not a few times that building constructors are risking their lives to build the beautiful buildings we are living or working in. Some of them are dying while some others end up with a Use synonyms
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Taking everything into consideration, the Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite