Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, abd have health problems as a result. Why do man working people not get enough exercise?
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exercise
either during the working Use synonyms
place
or Use synonyms
in
their Change preposition
during
relax
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time
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abd
have health issues eventually. Correct your spelling
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suggest working people who do not get enough Linking Words
exercises
in the working Fix the agreement mistake
exercise
place
and what could be done Use synonyms
for
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about
this
issue.
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place
is doing your job Use synonyms
in
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on
time
and it leads to pressure and Use synonyms
low
possibility to Add an article
the low
a low
exercise
. Working hard is one of the crucial Use synonyms
thing
in many people's Change to a plural noun
things
career
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also
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that
means spending too much Correct pronoun usage
apply
time
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over
some projects without physical movement. Change preposition
on
Moreover
, lack of Linking Words
exercise
in the working Use synonyms
place
will be the Use synonyms
couse
of serious health problems in the future. Correct your spelling
cause
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, most people who Linking Words
works
in the office have overweight problems which sooner or later Change the verb form
work
leads
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lead
heart
attack.
To avoid Add an article
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lack
of productivity and physical activity in the workplace employers should give their staff more Correct article usage
a lack
time
to do their job perfectly right on Use synonyms
time
. If employees have their own Use synonyms
time
management, they will be able to Use synonyms
exercise
after work. Use synonyms
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, doing Linking Words
exercise
in the working Use synonyms
place
would raise Use synonyms
workers
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workers'
worker's
mood
and increase their productivity in any project. Fix the agreement mistake
moods
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,Japan
exercise
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time
for their workers, and without exercising they don't allow employees to work.
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exercise
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place
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thing
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, not all of us figure it out yet.Linking Words
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