In recent years, there has been a rise in the popularity of second hand clothing amongst younger generations. Why is this happening? Do you think it's a positive or negative development?
Wearing
second
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second-hand
hand
clothes
has become a recent trend among youngsters. There are two main opinions on this
topic. One type of people supposes that it is really good news for our society, whereas others think that it is a bad trend.
On the one hand
, this
attitude is very eco-friendly because there is no reason to contribute new clothes
and our nature is not suffering from additional pollution. For instance
, huge companies such
as Nike have massive factories which have a bad impact on our environment. Moreover
, second
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second-hand
hand
clothes
are cheaper than new ones so individuals can save money and spend them on other things. Young individuals start to manage their finances and ,,
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apply
obviously
it is good news. According to Add a comma
,obviously
this
youngsters are becoming more mature because they think about financial and environmental issues.
On the other
hand
, wearing second
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second-hand
hand
stuff is not acceptable for many people because they are obsessed with hygiene. For example
, I am afraid of using someone's clothes
because I simply do not the person who has worn this
Correct determiner usage
these
clothes
before me. It seems to me that the previous owner could suffer from different diseases which might be spread by clothes
. Furthermore
, the factory's staff might be cut because of the decreased number of offers so many individuals might be fired and stay without work and money for living.
To sum up, I think that wearing second
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second-hand
hand
clothes
is a good development for our society because the trend is eco-friendly and it could save our
money.Correct pronoun usage
us
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