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Please explain the process of Pu-erh raw tea and ripe tea as shown in the diagram.

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A quick glance at the diagram illustrates how many phases are required in
roder
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order
 to produce Pu-erh raw and ripe
tea
. By and large, there are two
separete
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separate
 processes required to prepare raw and ripe
tea
 after
dryed
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drying
 the
tea
 leaf which is fried in the pan in order to inactivate enzymes under the sun. In terms of taking a look at the process of ripe
tea
, loosed raw
tea
 is fermented by bold and it exaggerates loosed ripe
tea
. After compressing the loose ripe
tea
,
final
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the final
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 ready-to-use Pu-erh ripe
tea
 will be ready. With regards to the process of raw
tea
, it follows more simple steps. After compressing the loose raw
tea
, it's stored for ages.
Subsequently
, vintage Pu-erh raw
tea
 will be ready after
certain
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 amount of time.
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