The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are.On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialize. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statements? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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in recent times, the development of the
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had a big impact on the population, when the other hand still there are some people who think it can limit their habit to socialize. I completely agree with the
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statement because the
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allows the community to have improvement. it is true that by using the
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we can expand our relations globally. for some folk who used the
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allowed them to find a friend in different countries.
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, the number of users of social media in Indonesia is increasing year by year. depending on
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situation, the majority get new friends from other countries by connecting by text or video call.
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, when they are connected with some society from China, they
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learning the culture and expanding their knowledge. in that case, the
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is bringing a lot of positive effects for the population.
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some societies who argue that the
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is a key to limiting all activities in real life.
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fully right, because if someone communicates with other people via the
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using some applications
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as Whatsapp, line or zoom, it has improved their ability to talk with foreign people.
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, when students in Indonesia have friends from Africa, they are using
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during the conversation. they not only socialise but
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improve their skill in foreign languages. in a nutshell, I agree that the
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gives a lot of benefits to the nation because by using the
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they can expand relations, information, and
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knowledge.
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