Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing taffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree. What measure do you think might be effective.

A segment of society believes that growing the cost of gasoline is
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excellent way to solve larger traffic and pollution problems.I differ
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above mentioned
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phenomenon.
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view will be discussed in the upcoming paragraph. To commence with
this
statement,Nowadays
growing
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of petrol
price
is always in
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issue.
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evryday
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everyday
the oil
price
increasing
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because of some irrelevant reason.While in some societies gasoline took a major role in every individual life
such
as people
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to
travell
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travel
in the buses,train or metro etc.
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some people cannot afford the
price
of petrol because of their low monthly income.
consequently
recently the war between Russia and Ukraine had more impact to high the cost of gas. On the other
side
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there are many other measures which can
initiated
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by the
government
such
as
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the government
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should have to make a wide road to avoid
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traffic congestion.Another
paragmetic
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pragmatic
reason to support
this
side
government
should have to make strict rules against the traffic lights or on
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.
Moreover
,
government
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the government
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should have to decrease the
more
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factories
work
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to control
the
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pollution as well and open more import companies to bring
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goods
one
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place to another. To conclude, increasing
petrol
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the petrol
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price
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is not the solution
of
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less trafficking and pollution .
Initially
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government
should have to take some major decisions on
this
issues
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issue
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.
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