Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing taffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree. What measure do you think might be effective.
A segment of society believes that growing the cost of gasoline is
the
excellent way to solve larger traffic and pollution problems.I differ Correct article usage
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this
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above mentioned
phenomenon.Add a hyphen
above-mentioned
However
,both the
view will be discussed in the upcoming paragraph.
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apply
this
statement,Nowadays growing
of petrol Correct article usage
the growing
price
is always in debatable
issue.Add an article
the debatable
Alternatively
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,Alternatively
evryday
the oil Correct your spelling
everyday
price
increasing
because of some irrelevant reason.While in some societies gasoline took a major role in every individual life Replace the word
increases
such
as people like
to Add the particle
to like
travell
in the buses,train or metro etc. Correct your spelling
travel
However
some people cannot afford the Add a comma
,However
price
of petrol because of their low monthly income.consequently
recently the war between Russia and Ukraine had more impact to high the cost of gas.
On the other side
there are many other measures which can Add a comma
,side
initiated
by the Change the verb form
be initiated
government
such
as government
should have to make a wide road to avoid Correct article usage
the government
the
traffic congestion.Another Correct article usage
apply
paragmetic
reason to support Correct your spelling
pragmatic
this
side government
should have to make strict rules against the traffic lights or on road sides
.Correct your spelling
roadsides
Moreover
,government
should have to decrease the Add an article
the government
more
factories Correct quantifier usage
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work
to control Wrong verb form
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the
pollution as well and open more import companies to bring Correct article usage
apply
the
goods Correct article usage
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one
place to another.
To conclude, increasing Change preposition
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petrol
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the petrol
price
is not the solution Fix the agreement mistake
prices
of
less trafficking and pollution . Change preposition
to
Initially
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,Initially
government
should have to take some major decisions on this
issues
.Fix the agreement mistake
issue
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