Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?
An increasing number of people in most megapolises is one of the biggest problems.
Although
there are plenty of reasons Linking Words
such
as rural-urban migration,particularly education-wise and careerwise for overpopulation in many cities,solutions exist for Linking Words
this
problem.
One of the main things that led to crowding in cities is immigration.Linking Words
In other words
,the majority of rural inhabitants are keen to travel to urban areas to find a job in order to fulfil their family requirements.Linking Words
This
is simply because there are no adequate salaries and job opportunities in the countryside,Linking Words
therefore
,breadwinners in the family are obliged to leave their homes so as to provide their family members with sufficient money.Linking Words
For instance
,hundreds of peasants are living in Baku in order to make a decent living,by living far from their dears and homelands men are working in various jobs.Linking Words
Furthermore
,it is quite obvious that a large number of universities are situated in major cities Linking Words
hence
students have to rent houses to stay within walking distance of the university.These two factors are the foundations of issues with regard to overpopulation.
I believe that concerns with respect to crowding in urban areas are not inevitable despite they are thought of as an inevitable problem.Linking Words
Firstly
,the government has an opportunity to support farmers in rural areas to increase their turnover.It will be an effective way to keep rural citizens in their homeland.Linking Words
Moreover
,the government can stimulate entrepreneurs to open new factories in the countryside to increase a lot of job opportunities for rural populations.Linking Words
This
method will decrease immigration drastically.Linking Words
For instance
,In the UK authorities launched a new project to boost agriculture again.Linking Words
That is
why they reported thousands of new vacancies for rural inhabitants.Linking Words
Additionally
, officials have a chance to displace some big universities to the Linking Words
suburb
.It is the best way to build universities in the Fix the agreement mistake
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suburb
because there is a much Fix the agreement mistake
suburbs
more quiet
place Correct word choice
quieter
rather
than in the city centre.
In conclusion,as a major ,concern overpopulation led to several issues Rephrase
apply
as well as
it has occurred from the above-mentioned factors.Linking Words
Although
it is almost impossible to eradicate Linking Words
this
problem,it is feasible to alleviate it to a minimum level.Linking Words
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