It is thought by some that a school teacher's role is to motivate and inspire students. However, other people believe that a teacher's primary role is to pass on knowledge. What do you think is a role of a teacher?

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In recent years, there had been a controversy about the role of teachers among school children. Some argue that it
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to pass on knowledge and others are of the opinion that its
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motivation and inspiration as well.
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, I think that depending on the context and situation, they can play both roles.
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with, our Modern
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curriculum today
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developed in a
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that can help in the development stage of a
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and not just for education.
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,a juvenile attending a school will be exposed to different social activities, bad friends and media, some of
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can corrupt the
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of the
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, when the teacher noticed the dropped in performance and change in
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, they can
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the
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or invite a
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so as to work on the changes and
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serve as
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inspiration
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, most of our parents today are busy chasing money and don't have time for their kids and
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put their children in
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boarding school. In
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case, the children are left to learn 70-80% about life from their new environment, friends and teachers because they are left to be fully dependent on them. The tutors will
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behave in a certain
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the students can learn from it.
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, their
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,
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of teaching, dialect and accent, achievements and ranks, in one
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or the order, all these has an impact
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the life of their students because they watch them daily and some
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teachers
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their role model-someone they wished to be like in future.
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,
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play a major role in motivating and inspiring the kids. In summary, the major
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of tutors
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to teach and
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knowledge but it goes beyond that because the kids watch
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daily basis and learn
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they teach but
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their
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. In order words, they motivate and inspire as well as passes information to the juveniles.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • comprehensive development
  • fostering curiosity
  • building confidence
  • lifelong love of learning
  • solid foundation
  • critical thinking skills
  • academic success
  • educational landscape
  • navigating information
  • holistic education
  • ethical values
  • social responsibility
  • personalized learning
  • diverse needs
  • learning styles
  • tailored educational experience
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