Schools should not force to children to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

One of the most controversial issues is that schools should not need teenagers to
study
another
language
. From my perspective, I
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party
partly
agree with
this
idea. On the one hand, there are numerous benefits than
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drawbacks.
First
of all,
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kind of person who really
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travelling
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lot of countries, so
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with the local people of that country is easy.
This
thing may
also
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skill
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.
Secondly
, it
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us know numerous and clearly about
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all
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countries.
Thirdly
, it’s
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big
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that apply person will be paid more money.
Finally
, someone
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that if teenagers
study
a foreign
language
, they will
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their original. I
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myself that I am taking part in an English club, and everyone
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here speak English very well, they even utilize it
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the club, but they never forget where they
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, and their mother
language
.
On the other hand
, I
also
believe that
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a foreign
language
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cons. Because it is another
language
, so many schools will invite teachers from foreign to teach students.
This
thing is very expensive for parents. Not only schools but
also
many English centres are take in parents. Not to mention the fact that
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many youngsters learn another
language
,
then
they forget their original and their mother
language
. They utilize it everywhere they want. In conclusion, education should not need children to
study
another
language
.
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