Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is ? what measures can governments take to discorage people from using their cars?
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The economy has been growing all over the world since the
second
part of the twenty century. Nowadays it is normal to have one or even more cars
in the family. However
, it is agreed that due to increased numbers of vehicles
our cities are moving toward a huge traffic jam collapse. Add a comma
,vehicles
Which
is why the possible Correct pronoun usage
This
actions
from the governments about such
circumstance
will be discussed in Fix the agreement mistake
circumstances
this
essay.
Currently
it is usual to spend two and more hours in a traffic jam per day Add a comma
,Currently
for
the modern world megapolis inhabitant. Change preposition
in
For example
, New-York
city residents Correct your spelling
New York
stuck
there Add a missing verb
are stuck
around
twelve days per year, which influence Change preposition
for around
to
the Change preposition
apply
economy
growth of the area. Replace the word
economic
Moreover
, such
Change the article
a such
the such
number
of Correct article usage
a number
cars
creates the
ecological problems for the metapolicies as well. Thereby the traffic congestion becomes one of the most important Correct article usage
apply
issue
that ought to be solved by governments official in each big city.
The measures for solving Change to a plural noun
issues
such
difficulties could be separated in two directions – restrictive and incentive. For instance
, Singapore could be taken as a great example of prohibitive actions
which were taken by the officials. In this
city
Add a comma
,city
the
car usage is restricted for Correct article usage
apply
few
days only during the week. Correct article usage
a few
On the other hand
, the incentive measures are directed to discourage people from using their vehicles. Public transport development is a very good way to reduce number
of private Change the article
the number
cars
.
To summarize I want to say that either restrictive and
incentive Correct word choice
or
actions
should be implemented by governments to achieve results. Although
prohibitive measures such
an
additional taxes for Correct your spelling
as
cars
owners, increased parking Change the noun form
car
price
, and so on, are more effective in a short period, Fix the agreement mistake
prices
the
Correct your spelling
they
encourage
Wrong verb form
encouraged
actions
ought to be made as well.Submitted by vitalysavchenko on
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