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Some people say History is one of the most important school subject. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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There has been a long-lasting argument that whether history important’ s importance
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 Science and Technology. I personally believe that
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 system should mainly focus on the Science and Technological types of
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society is impossible to be ignored. It is proved that a society needs to connect its roots in culture, traditions and more importantly morality. During school time, it is the best time
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 learning historical matters, taught by some specializations.
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 to the beneficial nature of history, being in an interactive atmosphere like a school class boost our passion and curiosity to gain more deep insights
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 any subject.
On the other hand
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 on the parts of subjects which lead students to make money better.
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 matter, nowadays, the modern would require more those expertise which
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 closely relevant to industry and production. According to these insights, educational systems are more efficient to prepare students for
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reality. Unfortunately, consumerism, as
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pandemic disease, monopolizes all aspects of life, generating the need for technical and scientific skills the most. All in all, despite the vital role history plays, I share the opinion of those who support technical and scientific subjects
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 top priority as the real world demands.
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