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Some people think immigrants should accept the new culture as their own. Others believe that they should keep their own culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #immigrants #culture
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PROFILE: Early
childhood
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 educator who is hardworking and dependable. I'm eager to use my
education
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 and
experience
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 to make a big difference in early
childhood
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 growth and
education
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. HIGHLIGHTS OF QUALIFICATION AND
SKILLS
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: • Self-directed, resourceful, and enthusiastic professional with a genuine interest in fostering students’ cognitive and social growth • Skilled in the design of developmentally appropriate, enriching, innovative and hands-on
activities
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, and lessons to meet social and emotional needs of
children
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 • Strong passion for literacy, motivation, and inspiration to create a fun and challenging learning
environment
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 with strong connections to community • Ability to actively communicate and collaborate with all levels of staff to ensure an optimum
environment
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 for students • Capability to adapt to
children
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 with special needs within the classroom and curriculum • Excellent verbal and written communication
skills
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 • Multilingual: English, Punjabi, and Hindi
EXPERIENCE
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: 1.RECE- HAKUNA MATATA CHILD CARE CENTRE- JNAUEARY 2022- PRESENT Duties- •Observing the
children
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 and documenting their progress it •Gained
experience
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 developing or implementation of
activities
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 •Learn to establish and maintain a safe and nurturing
environment
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 for the
children
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 •Lead young
children
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's
activities
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, tell stories, teach songs, and prepare craft materials. •Help
children
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 eat, dress, and use the toilet. •Maintain and clean daycare equipment. 2.SUPPLY TEACHER - TINY HOPPERS EARLY LEARNING CENTRE- OCTOBER 2021-
JANUARY
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 2022 Duties- • Observing the
children
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 and documenting it • Gained
experience
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 developing or implementation of
activities
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 • Learn to establish and maintain a safe and nurturing
environment
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 for the
children
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 3.CUSTOMER SERVICE RESPRESENTATIVE- RAJDHANI SWEETS- AUGUST 2020- AUGUST 2021 Address: 811 Bovaird Dr W Unit 19-20, Brampton, ON L6X 0T9 Phone-(905) 796-2177 DUTIES- •Supports customers by providing helpful information, •Answering questions, •Answering phone calls, and •Responding to complaints. 3.VIRTUAL FIELD PLACEMENTS DATE-
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 2021- AUGUST 2021 ORGANIZATION- HUMBER INSTITUTE OF TECHNOLOGY AND ADVANCED LEARNING, TORONTO, ONTARIO
EDUCATION
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: •Humber Institute of Technology and Advanced Learning, Toronto, Ontario- Early
Childhood
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Education
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 Diploma •Date: September 2019 - August 2021 COMPUTER
SKILLS
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 •MS office suite •Classroom management software •Preparing and delivering presentations using PowerPoint ACHIEVEMENTS/ACCOMPLISHMENTS/CERTIFICATES •FIRST AID AND CPR LEVEL C certificate November 2019- November 2022 Organization- St. John Ambulance •Registered Early
Childhood
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 Educator license- November 2021-
January
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 2022 •CCEYA completion certificate
January
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 2021 •Worker Health and Safety Awareness In 4 Steps certificate -
January
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 2021 Organization- ministry of labor, training, and
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 development.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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