There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. Write a letter to your manager. describe the complaints that have been made say why the reception area is important suggest how the reception area could be improved. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Munisa Khamrayeva. I am a worker that in your
company
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. I am writing to you
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letter that it is about visitors.
Last
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week visitors came to our
reception
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area
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.
Then
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they give me complaints about the
reception
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area
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. They said that your
company
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documents are out of place and you do not have modern things
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as a computer and air conditioner and other things. So,your
reception
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area
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does not meet the requirement and is
also
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not clean . Please correct your mistakes .
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is the reason, I would suggest that we need to change our
reception
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area
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condition and make it beautiful. Because each person will come here . And they must now back with an excellent imagination. It is useful to be famous for our
company
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. I think you can easily understand me . I hope you will resolve the matter. You must do
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work for our
company
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's condition. Thank you for your attention. Yours faithfully, ......... Khamrayeva Munisa.
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