Some people believe that you would is the best stage of happiness while other believe that a person can enjoy more happiness in other stages of life do you agree or disagree
In
this
modern apoch
, Correct your spelling
epoch
approach
children
are more and more intelligent than past . few masses proclaim that chillhood
is Correct your spelling
childhood
happiest
part of Change the article
the happiest
whole
Correct pronoun usage
their whole
life
where
few other mankind Correct word choice
whereas
opine
that, Change the wording
opines
Add an article
an individual
the individual
individual
can live Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
life
with enjoyment in other stages. In forthcoming paragraphs
I have discussed both Add a comma
,paragraphs
view
.
Taking into Change to a plural noun
views
formal
side of Add an article
the formal
this
phenomenal
.Replace the word
phenomenon
First
and foremost,children
not
have enough knowledge about Change the verb form
do not
did not
life
and they cannot able to discrimination
between what Replace the word
discriminate
right
and wrong thing so they enjoy Add a missing verb
is right
life
without any over thinking
. Correct your spelling
overthinking
Additionally
,childhood
is one of the life
stage
where everyone not has any disturbance and do any activities without any Change to a plural noun
stages
over thinking
,mainly not Correct your spelling
overthinking
have
a Wrong verb form
having
samefull
emotion ahead of other so they enjoy Correct your spelling
shameful
same full
lot
Change the article
a lot
of
than youngsters.Change preposition
apply
For instance
,children
can play everywhere with wear only underwear and enjoy life
without any shame ,where
young people and Correct word choice
whereas
other
cannot able to play like Correct pronoun usage
others
children
and also
have some restriction
.like,they cannot wear only underwear and have emotion.
To comments Fix the agreement mistake
restrictions
with
Change preposition
on
second
formal side, in Correct article usage
the second
Correct article usage
the teenager
teenager
group and Replace the word
teenage
a
head stages everyone Correct article usage
the
have
Change the verb form
has
maturity
,and they Add an article
the maturity
able
to crack their dreams with Add a missing verb
are able
hardwork
.on Correct your spelling
hard work
the
other word,if adolescence Correct article usage
apply
want
to crack their future dream they can do some hard work and because of Change the verb form
wants
this
, they able to achieve their dream in real life
and that give them more happiness then
childhood
.Due to they
get that particular thing which was his/her future dream without any aid of parents that give Change preposition
They
more
happiness rather than Correct pronoun usage
them more
childhood
. Furthermore
, many individual
cannot able to get happiness in Change to a plural noun
individuals
childhood
because of poor
Correct article usage
the poor
situation
of Fix the agreement mistake
situations
house
and Add an article
the house
also
from poor family
due to Fix the agreement mistake
families
this
, they cannot able to live their childhood
and did lot
of hard work Correct article usage
a lot
in
Change preposition
apply
childhood
.After childhood
they are sufficient to do everything and Add a comma
,childhood
also
being
independent.So, they do hard work and make money and be Wrong verb form
be
welthy
and that Correct your spelling
wealthy
healthy
make
their Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
life
more enjoyable rather than children
As per
my opinion ,Change preposition
In
Correct your spelling
childhood
chilhood
is one of the stages where we can want to go again because there is no Correct your spelling
childhood
any
pressure to be Correct quantifier usage
apply
reach
and wealthy ,and there is Correct your spelling
rich
not
any burden Correct your spelling
no
and
fear Correct word choice
or
for
Lifestyle managementChange preposition
of
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