Parents should encourage children to spend a list time in studies and more time in physics activities do you agree
In
this
modern epoch, some masses proclaim that.parents
should give information and encouragement to their offspring to spend their muchness time in do outdoor activities
rather then
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than
do
academic work. I have elaborate concur side in forthcoming paragraphs
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doing
this
phenomenally. First
and foremost, students who are below 10 years, they do not have abilities for what think is good and wrong for them. Additionally
, including starting age of children
, they are mostly depending on their parents
. And children
follow their parents
also
. So, children
are becoming cause potatoes if their parents
do not encourage them to spend quality time in
doing outdoor Change preposition
apply
activities
.And, it occurred many constitutions like, like effective on children
's minds and also
effective their nature and also
children
can be introvert
for Replace the word
introverted
whole
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their whole
life
. Further more
, only Correct your spelling
Furthermore
do
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doing
study
can be not beneficial for any children
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child
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, for instance,
for instance
one
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apply
children
who only concentrate in Change to a singular noun
child
study
for Add an article
the study
a study
while
time. So, they cannot able to learn social skills and Correct your spelling
whole
not
able to brief knowledge about the world and other people's nature and it can Add a missing verb
are not
be take
many causes in Change the verb form
take
children
's future life
. like,he or she could not able to communicate with other
and could not Correct pronoun usage
others
sufficient
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sufficiently
to
make relationships with other
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apply
Secondly
, not only studying but also
goods
physical body is important for living Correct article usage
a goods
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a goods
goods
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good
life
. One
other word
, sitting in Fix the agreement mistake
words
at
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apply
one
place for the long term causes many diseases like obesity and diabetes. And, by doing physical children
can able to live life
with the out any physical issues. For example
, one
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apply
children
who Change to a singular noun
child
doing
bought Wrong verb form
do
study
and Outer activities
, he or she
cannot only overcome Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
stress related Change preposition
to theirs
theirs
studying but Correct pronoun usage
their
also
build their strong body
through some outdoor Fix the agreement mistake
bodies
activities
. For exampal
.swimming cycling and many other games.
In conclusion, I fully support the view that Correct your spelling
example
children
should be encouraged by their parents
for
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to
children's
good body strength and good Change noun form
children
life
in childhood without any tension of study
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