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The leaders or directors of organisations are often older people but some people say that young people can also be leaders. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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we often see that the directors of
organisation
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 and companies are older citizens but some individuals argue about the notion by stating that young people can
also
 be leaders. I strongly agree
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 the statement.
Further
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 I elucidated my point of
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 in regard
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 my agreement. on the one hand, Young leaders bring more advantages to the company
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 they are exposed to the latest technical knowledge and skills. They have a modern perspective in every situation which can lead them towards success efficiently and might open different doors to reach the peak.
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, a juvenile is able
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 crack various modern and
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 strategies to cope
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with issues and stimulate workforces to make efforts to achieve more and more. They are
also
 able to provide a suitable work environment according to the
conveniency
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 of the employees . On the flip side ,elderly people are more experienced and tackled various highs and lows in their
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 and can face typical matters easily.
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 ,they are more likely to find a feasible solution as they have gone through a lot and can deal with circumstances calmly rather than that
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yelling. Age-old are considered to have more reliable decisions because of their seniority which inculcates advantages to the corporation. To put
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 a nutshell, even if aged ones
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 most of the experience ,I think that teenagers can be appointed as leaders because they possess
quality
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 of modernisation and new thinking which is the greatest need of
hour
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 . In
present
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 scenario , most of the stuff is based on global interaction which can be
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 for a young leader.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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  • firstly
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  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
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