In the developed world, average life expectency is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society ? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging population.

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in the developed world, moderate life is rising up and
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education and needed service,
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percentage of
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service and,
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society without providing at least the
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minimum
of the requirements.
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governments
in Egypt could not support new
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huge
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that causes we have to find a new solution to solve the problem by
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the number of
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. In order to solve
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problem the governments should post the
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awareness
of the
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dangerous
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and they should limit
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by themselves.
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,
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problem
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the government might put the limitation for each family
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to be maximum
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members only.
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out that by
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birth
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that will solve 80% of the problem only. In conclusion, I would
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reiterate
the main cause which is lack of education and needed services.
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, the government should
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publish
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knowelede
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knowledge
on parents.
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put the limit for
birth
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as mentioned.
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