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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used for in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?

#computers #business #hospitals #crime #detection #planes #future #dependence
It is said that
computers
 are the future,but
is
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 good for
human
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 future? We are people of the new time.You don't need to be good at
computers
 to find something,just open the website and search.
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beginning
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 it seems to be the best way of life.You can buy everything,watch everything,
post
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 everything.But is it
a
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real
happines
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happiness
?Our lives started to be so automatistic that we just have to lie on the sofa and waste our time and money.As far as
i
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 am concerned,
computer
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the computer
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 was
disegned
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designed
 to solve some kinds of
mathimatic
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mathematic
mathematical
mathematics
 problems.In our
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century
centure
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 it is hard to
image
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 that
computer
 was designed only for solving
the
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problems.Now it is
one
 of the most
importand
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important
part
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 of world economics.Companies can make plenty of
trasg
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trash
 ads and just spam them,in any
wayses
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way
 they will make
a
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money.
However
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computers
 and www have lots of upsides.The
first
one
 and maybe
main
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 reason why people are using
computers
is
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 that searching for information is much faster than spending hours in the library.
Styding
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Styling
 on the
computer
 is much better than making the same work but on the phone.I am a new PC user so
i
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definatly
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definitely
 can say that
computer
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 is more comfortable than any other
tipes
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types
 of
sources
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. The
second
one
 is that you can make
a
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new friends.When you
scrule
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scroll
scale
scruple
 the internet everything is up to you.You can find lots of new interesting people from all spots
of
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 our planet.But
in
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 the other hand is that you can be fooled easily.Actually,
i
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cant
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can't
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 even know if you are
chating
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chatting
 with
pretty
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a pretty
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 girl which is in the picture or
is
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if is
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 it
a
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 old
kidnaper
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.When you chat with someone just be
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careful
carefull
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careful
 and
dont
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don't
 give personal information In my opinion,
computers
 are
one
 of the most important inventions of our time.They can do totally
everythinf
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everything
 now,but
dont
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don't
 forget that they will never replace humans in art
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because we have
a souls
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a soul
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