You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give details of your study plans; explain why you want to get a part-time job; suggest how your friend could help you find a job.

Hi Jane How is it going?Hope that everything is okay. I am moving abroad and will study in the UK.It will be tough and

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definitely

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in need

of a job.You live in London,so

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think you can help me. My education is going to start in September.As far as

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am

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concerned

, my timetable will not be extremely hard in the beginning.I will have periods from 10 to 15,after that

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have lots of time.

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free day on Friday,so

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can

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more on weekends. Living abroad when you are without your family is not a piece of cake.Working sometimes

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is going to rescue me.My chummery is paid,so

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need money mainly for food and shopping.

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it is

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way to start my adulthood.You know,

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have never worked,at all.I am not spoiled,just a caught potato.Maybe it is a

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time

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since i

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started to be a breadwinner for myself. I have no clue where to start searching.I have never been to the UK.I

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don't

even know where

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can

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my age.I know that you live in

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,so you

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have heard about some

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for adolescents.Let me tell

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about my characteristics to make your search easier.

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am young,

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can do any kind of

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like being a staff member in some shop or just

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a waiter.

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am flexible and can do

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on weekends. Jane,hope you will help me with my request

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because it will make my life more effortless.Thanks in advance.Have a nice day