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Day to day, there is a constant reminder of brands, products and services appearing in almost every aspect of our daily lives. The impacts of advertising, which in my view, has become so cleverly designed that it has had adverse effects on our well-being without people’s realisation.

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Day
 to
day
, there is a constant
reminder
 of
brands
,
products
 and
services
 appearing in almost every
aspect
 of our daily
lives
. The
impacts
 of advertising, which in my
view
, has become so cleverly designed that it has had adverse
effects
 on our well-being without
people’s
realisation
.
Day
 to
day
, there is a constant
reminder
 of
brands
,
products
 and
services
 appearing in almost every
aspect
 of our daily
lives
. The
impacts
 of advertising, which in my
view
, has become so cleverly designed that it has had adverse
effects
 on our well-being without
people’s
realisation
.
Day
 to
day
, there is a constant
reminder
 of
brands
,
products
 and
services
 appearing in almost every
aspect
 of our daily
lives
. The
impacts
 of advertising, which in my
view
, has become so cleverly designed that it has had adverse
effects
 on our well-being without
people’s
realisation
.
Day
 to
day
, there is a constant
reminder
 of
brands
,
products
 and
services
 appearing in almost every
aspect
 of our daily
lives
. The
impacts
 of advertising, which in my
view
, has become so cleverly designed that it has had adverse
effects
 on our well-being without
people’s
realisation
.
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