Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities. Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic in big cities.

a generation ago,
people
were moved easily
one
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to another place without facing any traffic.
However
, Major cities are now seeing a massive amount of
problem
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problems
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due to the rapid
cars
inreased
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increased
.
This
essay will look at the core reasons for
this
and propose some solid solutions. One of the main causes of the problems is that the number of main
roads
are
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quite minimum. By
this
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i
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mean
roads
are few and the buses and
cars
have to choose that route to go
their
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destinations.
For example
, public bus, tourist bus,
private
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and private
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cars
mainly have to use highway
roads
, so if it is few
then
traffic can not be controlled properly
, .
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This
solution is to build alternative
roads
that can be used daily by
cities
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city
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people
. Another
problem
is that
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the enviroment
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enviroment
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environment
is going worse.
this
is to say
people
is
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are
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ignoring the disaster that
occuring
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occurring
from
the
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apply
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pollution every year by releasing bad emissions. To tackle
this
issue, transports have to minimise their number of transportation
service
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services
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. A
third
issue of the
problem
is that tourists place is facing
lower
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a lower
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amount of visitors. To be more precise,
some
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in some
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poor countries where monuments are found there
traffics
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traffic
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system is not so good and their
transportaion
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transportation
don't
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doesn't
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follow the driving rules.
as a result
, overseas
people
are now avoiding that type of
countries
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country
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and
GDP
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will not increase. The way forward could be to spread the
important
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importance
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of rules and
regulation
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regulations
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of
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for
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driving
cars
and
taking
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strict action
by
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the government. To sum up, increasing traffics can diminish the beauty of nature , due to the reasons
such
as
rising
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cars
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number of cars
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, unskilled driver and so on. My view is that the more responsibility for solving the
problem
lies with the
people
and the
people
living
counries
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countries
government
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hands by taking some necessary developments.
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