Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others, however, believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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children
should Use synonyms
use
their Use synonyms
phones
during the school Use synonyms
day
.
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children
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child
use
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day
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phones
to school to keep in contact at every moment. Use synonyms
Thus
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children
are doing or if they have some problems. Use synonyms
For example
, if a child is feeling sick, he or she can easily call or send a message to his or her parents.
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, young people should not Linking Words
use
the phone during Use synonyms
the
study time because it is Correct article usage
apply
detrimental
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a detrimental
to
their learning and life. Change preposition
on
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attention during the lesson Change preposition
apply
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that
is why the student does not listen enough, Correct pronoun usage
which
the
quality of the lesson can not be valuable. Correct word choice
and the
In addition
, they always think about social media Linking Words
such
as Instagram and Telegram. Linking Words
As a result
, they can not concentrate their mind.
In conclusion, Linking Words
although
, it will have a negative effect on their education, Linking Words
nevertheless
, it will be beneficial for them. If they Linking Words
use
the phone effectively in their leisure time.Use synonyms
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