Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?

At the moment,
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plenty of
people
use computers
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and
also
many children have access to play
computer
games
. The main negative impact of playing
video
games
is
deterioration
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the deterioration
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of health and we can solve
this
problem
with
time
control.
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drawbacks
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the drawbacks
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which
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computer
games
can give and how can we solve
this
problem
.
To begin
,
video
games
can give a multitude of
damages
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damage
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to children and
people
. Mainly,
computer
games
can give
such
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problems with health
as
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poor eyesight, posture curve,
mental
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ill
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and so on. These problems were caused by not complying with the rules of sitting at the
computer
.
Furthermore
,
people
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to be
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stuck a lot of
time
behind
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a
computer
can feel stress and self-doubt since
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the brain
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brain
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brains
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of those
people
cannot distinguish the
game
from reality.
Nevertheless
, the
second
main
problem
is
video
game
addiction. Because
people
cannot get out of the
game
and just get stuck on the
computer
all day.
For example
, 10% of all
computer
game
players are addicted.
Therefore
, it becomes a global
problem
among
people
and especially among children.
However
, we have
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numerous
of
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methods to solve
this
problem
.
First
of all,
people
should set a
time
to control themselves. They should play
video
games
2-3 hours in
day
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the day
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.
This
is the best
time
for gamers.
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they should look at the monitor at a distance of 50 cm and keep a smooth posture not to worsen health.
Moreover
, producers of
games
should set
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when
people
play their
games
there
is
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should pop up
notice
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notices
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about
time
and about rules to sit on a
computer
correctly. In conclusion,
computer
addiction of
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global
problem
among
people
.
Hence
, please to these measures we can solve
this
problem
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