In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicls will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweight the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, There is a
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serious
debate on
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cars and these vehicles will move passengers without any driver. While there are some drawbacks
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with
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machines. I believe the main benefits are more
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substantial
. On the one hand, a
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potential
disadvantage of
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type of
cars
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can
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increase
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number of unemployed.
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, people can
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their jobs
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as public transport
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.
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Also
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individuals can become too
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reliant
on technology. In my personal
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experience
, one of my
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use computer
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algorithms
to do their job and after
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, once her system had a technical problem she does not even remember her task
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can do it.
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, a primary benefit
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driverless
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car is
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robots
do not have
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.
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, they can not impress by human
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behaviour
so they do not make mistakes. And
also
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these kind
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of cars can reduce the number of
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an accident
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accident
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where
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that
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happened by human error
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as bad habit driver and
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.
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, they can drive better than
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even in bad
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condition
conditions
like as bad
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weather
and bad
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. In
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addition
, using
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public
transports
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can reduce
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the cost
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of
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governments.
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, can enhance
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public
transports
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. On balance, It is true
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vehcials
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vehicles
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disadvantageous under certain circumstances.
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, I believe the positive effects in
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of automation can decrease human errors and can develop
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condition
conditions
of driving and
also
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can lead to
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the public transport and
the
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governments can save more money through using
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trasports
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transports
transport
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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