Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Hobbies
are very common and people
love to spend time
learning and developing in
their extraordinary skills.Change preposition
apply
These day
, some Change the determiner
This day
These days
people
allot time
for activites
that they like to do Correct your spelling
activities
at
free Change preposition
in
time
. In this
essay, I will explain what I think of this
statement and the
effects on a person and society.
Personally, I find Change the word
its
hobbies
have a great influence in
Change preposition
on
ourselves
. Correct pronoun usage
us
Firstly
, these activities that we are intrested
in Correct your spelling
interested
helps
us to stay distracted from our busy lives and schedules. Correct subject-verb agreement
help
Moreover
, they bring purpose to our life, by improving our methods and tactics while performing them. Secondly
, These devotions enhances
the development of our skills and talents, because while we perform we tend to research for better ways or to try learning from a professional. Change the verb form
enhance
For example
, I had a hobby of playing drums
and Change the article
the drums
this
made me more happy
because when I spend too much Replace the words
happier
time
for play this
instrument, and
I try to improve my skills. Correct word choice
apply
Also
, this
kept me away from anxiety and pressure from my workplace.
For an individual, hobbies
play an important role in their lives. Mainly, after a hectic day of work people
get to spend some time
in
doing things that they love. By, devoting their Change preposition
apply
time
for
Change preposition
to
hobbies
, a person feels more relaxed and stress free
, especially when they go through daily work pressure. In societies, Add a hyphen
stress-free
people
of similar intrests
Correct your spelling
interests
tries
to bring Correct subject-verb agreement
try
adventours
events to the communities, to help raise funds or charities. Correct your spelling
adventurous
Moreover
, these people
will stay more connected during this
programmes.
In conclusion, devoting Correct determiner usage
these
time
for
Change preposition
to
hobbies
will be really helpful for people
who are undergoing through
anxiety and stress. For, Change preposition
apply
this
stays us occupied with multiple activites
.Correct your spelling
activities
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