You recently visited a local restaurant with your family and had a very good meal. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper. In your letter ● explain where the restaurant is ● describe what you ate in the restaurant ● say why you would recommend the restaurant to others

Dear Sir or Madam, Hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. My name is Joziba Maxmasoliyeva. I and my family recently visited your

restaurant

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. I know your

restaurant

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very well . Because your

restaurant

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is in front of my school . So

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made a point of going in every time

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saw it and

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finally

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went there recently . That day we ate pizza . To tell the trust,

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have never eaten a sweet pizza like that day . For

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reason,

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recommend everyone to come to

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place . Not only their pizzas but

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other foods are too delicious .

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, their service is great . It should

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be noted that the

restaurant

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is cosy and its appearance is very beautiful . I want to thank you at the end of my letter . Thank you for your attention. Yours faithfully, Maxmasoliyeva Joziba.

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Jan 23, 2023

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

157 words

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You recently visited a local restaurant with your family and had a very good meal. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper. In your letter ● explain where the restaurant is ● describe what you ate in the restaurant ● say why you would recommend the restaurant to others

Structure your letter

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