Write a letter to a friend who will come to your country to work for 6 months. In your letter, you should: • recommend a city • suggest a few jobs that your friend could do • give some opinions about making friends with the locals.

Dear Tooba, I hope you are doing well. I received your letter yesterday and I am glad that you came to Pakistan for employment hunting and would stay here for 6 months. I would really want you to stay in Karachi as I am currently residing here. I would help you to find out a good hotel for accommodation. In Karachi, you may find employment easily. You can apply for any sales, marketing or accounts-related vacancies as your qualification would meet the job specifications. In your job hunting, you can check the local newspapers and job placement websites. During your stay in Karachi, make friends so you don't get bored in your free time. Go jogging in the morning and join a local club where you can meet new people. Exchange your number with the new people and invite them for hangouts so you will have a companion to guide you. Let me know when you have arrived so that I can guide you more. Looking forward to meeting you soon. Best regards, Sana Farooq

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Jan 24, 2023

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

175 words

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Write a letter to a friend who will come to your country to work for 6 months. In your letter, you should: • recommend a city • suggest a few jobs that your friend could do • give some opinions about making friends with the locals.

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