Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is commonly held that when faced with unappealing circumstances, it is better to be open and accept the hardship.

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, it is

also

discussed that one should

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to change the situation for himself.

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favor of the latter. On one hand, life’s not always appealing so, it is common to face money shortage or get stuck in a career that doesn’t appeal to you. Those who are reluctant

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and do not know how to find coping mechanisms in

such

situations, tend to get hurt. On the other hand, Others who do know how to manage,

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strength and patience, for instance,

people

who work harder

instead

of becoming frustrated, will overcome the issue way sooner, and more conveniently because they are convinced that nothing in life is permanent, neither are hardships. And the perspective itself will eventually lead to career growth, hopefulness and self-improvement. and circumstances take

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for the better. On the other side of the argument, it is fairly argued that accepting misery is not an option, for

people

may get

accustom

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to it. Recent studies at Santa Cruz University of California have shown that the more

people

are prompted to think that things are out of control, the more they are likely to fall prey to procrastination.

Moreover

, doing nothing will not change anything, so it is better that

people

try to make their own luck and be in charge of their own lives

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if that means finding a new job that suits them better, or

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longer hours to compensate

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shortage of money. In my perspective, even though acceptance

instills

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a form of resistance, it is more than likely to turn into worse personal traits

such

as laziness and indolence, because our brain is potentially inclined towards what’s comfortable, and doing nothing in the face of obstacles lays stages for later issues and prevents individuals from having an active life. On balance, despite the fact that acceptance is a good chance to maintain perpetual growth, patience and strength, it can be harmful, if it’s mistaken with avoidance.