Some people are happy to spend their whole life living in the same area. Others prefer to live in many different places in their lifetime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In my opinion,
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school provides greater benefits compared to what is offered in homeschooling. Based on my own experience,
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school has taught me beyond the study materials given. It was the process of obtaining
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knowledge through debate, observing others, and feedback from fellow students that
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improved my skills and knowledge. In conclusion, I believe regular school is a superior method of education. The social experience that can only be obtained in regular schools is far more beneficial compared to parental influence and
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sense of familiarity
  • Belonging
  • Community
  • Social connections
  • Local environment
  • Resources
  • Limited exposure
  • Different cultures
  • Experiences
  • Stagnation
  • Complacency
  • Personal growth
  • Development
  • Diverse cultures
  • Perspectives
  • Adaptability
  • Flexibility
  • Stability
  • Roots
  • Long-lasting relationships
  • Adjustment
  • New environments
  • Balanced approach
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