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Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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It is arguably believed that in recent days
people
 tend to be rather reluctant of upholding long-established
traditions
.
Also
, there are a considerable number of
people
 who believe
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instilling
 deep-rooted
cultures
 and
traditions
 is vital. The essay will examine both views dividedly and argues in the favor of the latter.
To begin
 with, Considering the fact that
cultures
 and
traditions
 can be fluid and forever changing, it is inevitable to give in to
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 of some.
However
, it
also
 appears that in
the
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modernized
civilization
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people
 don’t appear as willing to preserve well-established
cultures
 as they used to be ages ago, and
that is
due to
 the fostering of youth culture. Seemingly, newly established
cultures
 developed by new generations hold
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substantial sway over how
traditions
 are rarely kept.
Therefore
, the initiating gap between the set of values
people
 are currently undergoing is rather unacceptable and inconvenient to adopt, and it is potentially raising conflicts.
Nevertheless
,
cultures
 instil an invisible bonding that ties
people
 together and brings joy, uniformity and harmony to
people
’s lives, which if eliminated fully,
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can lay stages for cultural diversity, negligence and division.
For instance
,
the
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annual ceremonies like new year or Christmas
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 significant, since they spread limitless joy and wipe away despair of the mundane. In my perspective, making realistic efforts to uphold cultural values and
traditions
 is crucial. but, exhorting society to stick rigidly to them is questioning
people
’s
value
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 and
therefore
, the entire meaning of tradition falls under question, and preserving cultural myths and ancient ethics just for the sake of preserving them will not be promising either.
To conclude
, even though there are several aspects
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which we can all agree keeping
traditions
 alive is
cruicial
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crucial
, forcefully and prejudicially bounding ourselves to them will not be the answer.
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