You use the local swimming pool often, and during one of your visits, you encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter, describe what the problem was, tell what the swimming pool staff have done about it, suggest your own solution to the problem.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my frustration that when I was using the swimming

pool

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last

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week it was extremely dirty.

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, there were

few

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a few

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leaves of trees floating on one side of the

pool

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. Apart from that, when I jumped into the

pool

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it contained so much chlorine which made my eyes burn a lot and because of

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I had to go to an eye specialist.

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, I informed the staff that take out all the leaves from the swimming

pool

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but they told me that their cleaning equipment has broken and nets of various products has been torn by a rat.

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, I suggest you

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buy

napthalin

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naphthalene

balls which will absorb all the excessive chlorine from the

pool

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and there is a shop nearby where you can rent cleaning

equipments

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equipment

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it will be a good option to save your

pool

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’s reputation currently. I would like you to act upon the above-mentioned problem on an urgent basis. Yours sincerely, Shah Harshil

harshil31099Tue Jan 24 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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6 paragraphs

171 words

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old fashioned values such as honour, kindness, and trust no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?