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one of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. do you thing the advantages of this development woutweight the disadvantage?

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this
 modern era,
the
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life expectancy
bcome
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become
becomes
 longer
beacuse
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because
 of
the
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medical
improved
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, which permits
to
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one to
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 live a normal life even if some type of
patologies
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pathologies
as
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 diabetes or asthma. In fact, the benefits of
this
 big development in medical knowladagement provide specific medicine that a person can take
dayly
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daily
 to
contrart
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contract
contrast
 his
patologies
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pathologies
 even if he or she can not really heal from it. To illustrate, in the case of people with
sesonal
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seasonal
 allergies, they can take some particular strong
drugs
 for a long period of time to continue all the activities that they normally do as work, study or play
sport
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.
On the other hand
, it is true that a downside of
this
 big choice of
drugs
 can create problems
such
 as addiction or abuse. In response to it, the
governament
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government
 create a law by which the strongest
drugs
 can be given
also
 after a doctor's prescription with the precise quantity needed by the patient. In spite
of
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,
evry
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every
subjet
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subject
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 should be
resoponsable
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responsible
 and use the medicine only if
is
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necessary. In
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addiction
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, we must remember that our grandparents, in the past years when they
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were
wew
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were
 young, the
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probability
probablility
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probability
 to die for
cold
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 or flu was so high
while
 nowadays is almost impossible and only thak to all medical research and discovers, In summary,
medicine
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 development permit
that
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a lot of people
live
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to live
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 a normal life and
that
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a lot of
sickness
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 can be
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a cure
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cure
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 or
alleviate
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 with
a
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od
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of
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drugs
 which must
be control
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 and
select
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 by doctors.
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