Some people believe that women should stay at home and should take care of children, while others believe that women should work. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There's no denying that women are considered to be the of any developed society. It is believed by some that they must stay indoors and parent their kids
while
others think that find a job. This
essay will discuss both sides of the coin and argue in favor
of the latter.Change the spelling
favour
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite