You organised a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative. Many elderly guests attended this party which of grand success. Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter, Give details of party the reasons why party was successful Mention a staff member who helped you a lot
Dear sir or madam,
I am writing
this
letter to thank you and your crew. We did gather up to celebrate my grand father
90's birthday in Sunset Hotel Correct your spelling
grandfather
at
Change preposition
apply
last
saturday
and your crew did a great job.
A lot of elder people Change the capitalization
Saturday
came
Add the preposition
tocame
this
party so I requested for
some special treatment especially helping them Change preposition
apply
to
their needs kindly. Party has an Italian theme as my Change preposition
with
grand father
was born in Italy but he had to immigrate and couldn't go back so he miss his culture. Correct your spelling
grandfather
Decorations
were amazing and Correct article usage
The decorations
foods
are even better! The cake's Correct article usage
the foods
colors
were red, green and white like the Italian flag, my family Change the spelling
colours
is love
Change the verb form
loves
this
detail. Everyone enjoyed their meal and the environment was quiet
Correct your spelling
quite
cosy
. I have to thank Correct word choice
and cosy
spesificly
Correct your spelling
specifically
Mrs.
Philips because she was really helpful to my Change the punctuation
Mrs
grand mother
. She helped her to Correct your spelling
grandmother
walking
when I wasn't around her. My nanny said Change the verb form
walk
that
how kind she is.
Yours faithfully,
Elif Beyza ÖnderCorrect word choice
apply
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.