Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money money on other things to benefit the nation . To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Space
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exploration is
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exciting activity among powerful
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countries
. Spending money on exploring
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space
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would be worthless and it had better use for the country's benefit. In my opinion, I quite disagree that it is a total waste
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for
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mission
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because it would lead to
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out how the universe works and
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the
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future technology for
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To explore
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the
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outside,
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requires a large budget for the exploration. The outside world is completely different from the
earth
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because it does not have oxygen for life. It needs to have
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machine to produce the gas for breathing.
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, The radiation would
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affect directly to the pilot's body and would be
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for
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skin
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and metabolism.
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, it requires
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specific suit for the
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team.
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, not just the rocket but
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machine that the government is to invest in is very expensive. These costs are reasonable for the
space
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activity. The many advantages of the mission beyond the
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are worth it
to spend on
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spending
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. Nowadays,
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scientist is likely to precisely predict the weather because the
statellites
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satellites
,
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, around the world collect
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weather data continuously and send
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the
earth
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.
This
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technology is
achevement
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achievement
because of
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space
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techonology
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technology
. The
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station
also
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use
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solar light to
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produce
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power
by
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from
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solar cell. It would reduce the cost
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fuel and
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energy production. In conclusion, The budget
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the
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space
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exploration is essential for people and
environment
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the environment
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in the future. All countries would like to invest in renewable energy and find a solution for
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climate change. That's why the outside
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would be
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to be the
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step for
human
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • complete waste
  • benefit the nation
  • technological advancements
  • foster
  • international cooperation
  • inspire
  • engage
  • boost the economy
  • long-term benefits
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