Some people say that globalization will lead to a loss of cultural identity. Others think that globalization will result in world peace and harmony. To what extent do you agree with either sentence?

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Some say world
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will push us to a loss of cultural uniqueness. Others feel in the future world will be peaceful and harmonized because of
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. In my opinion, world
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will lead humankind to a peaceful and intact community. Cultural identity might be important, which makes us unique and raise our interest to learn more about other nationalities. I would argue that in our ever-developing century, our differences are already minimized before
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, in the end, people wouldn't mind losing their origin.
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, EU
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share the same currency and there is almost no border to separate them,
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half of the citizens could speak their
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' languages.
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, if
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tighten their partnership in many ways, that means there would be no wars and political debates. In my opinion, I wouldn't want to raise my children, where there are negative things happening every day.
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, recently Russia and Ukraine had a whole world-known war going on. In
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case, there is no
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thing as globalizing and shaking hands with our
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. In conclusion, loss of originality was always there before
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,
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,
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wouldn't make wars and political debates that frighten us.
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