A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves. • Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her. • Explain how to apply for the job.
Dear Toby,
I hope you and your family are doing well. I enthusiastic to learn new things.
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week and my sincere apologies for the late reply because I was busy with my project
which the deadline was on last
Friday. I am writing this
letter to inform you that there is a vacant junior project
engineer position in my company which I have been working since
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year.
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my company is one of the telecom service providers in Singapore, the roles and responsibilities for this
post are mainly focused on the
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management and vendor management. Moreover
, you are required to work closely with the contractors who are carrying out the fibre cable laying work for the telecom infrastructure.
As far as I know, you have completed your undergraduate degree in project
management and I believe you are the most suitable candidate for this
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, I would like to recommend you to my superior if you are interested the
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I can forward it to my manager for review.
I am looking forward to hearing good news from you and can’t wait to welcome you as my colleague.
Warm Regards,
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite