A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves. • Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her. • Explain how to apply for the job.

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Dear Toby, I hope you and your family are doing well. I

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received your letter

last

week and my sincere apologies for the late reply because I was busy with my

project

which the deadline was on

last

Friday. I am writing

this

letter to inform you that there is a vacant junior

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engineer position in my company which I have been working

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last

year.

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my company is one of the telecom service providers in Singapore, the roles and responsibilities for

this

post are mainly focused on

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project

management and vendor management.

Moreover

, you are required to work closely with the contractors who are carrying out the fibre cable laying work for the telecom infrastructure. As far as I know, you have completed your undergraduate degree in

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management and I believe you are the most suitable candidate for

this

post.

Furthermore

, you are a

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sociable

person and I have no doubt

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you regarding

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managing vendors and contractors. On top of that, our hiring manager is looking for the applicants like you who

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positive attitudes and

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enthusiastic to learn new things.

Lastly

, I would like to recommend you to my superior if you are interested

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opening position in my company. You can mail your resume to my

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email address [email protected]

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I can forward it to my manager for review. I am looking forward to hearing good news from you and can’t wait to welcome you as my colleague. Warm Regards,

Hninn

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Hinn

Submitted by huizhu07 on Tue Jan 24 2023

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

256 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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