A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves. • Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her. • Explain how to apply for the job.

Dear Toby, I hope you and your family are doing well. I
have
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received your letter
last
week and my sincere apologies for the late reply because I was busy with my
project
which the deadline was on
last
Friday. I am writing
this
letter to inform you that there is a vacant junior
project
engineer position in my company which I have been working
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last
year.
Hence
my company is one of the telecom service providers in Singapore, the roles and responsibilities for
this
post are mainly focused on
the
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project
management and vendor management.
Moreover
, you are required to work closely with the contractors who are carrying out the fibre cable laying work for the telecom infrastructure. As far as I know, you have completed your undergraduate degree in
project
management and I believe you are the most suitable candidate for
this
post.
Furthermore
, you are a
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sociable
person and I have no doubt
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you regarding
with
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managing vendors and contractors. On top of that, our hiring manager is looking for the applicants like you who
has
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positive attitudes and
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enthusiastic to learn new things.
Lastly
, I would like to recommend you to my superior if you are interested
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opening position in my company. You can mail your resume to my
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personal’s
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email address [email protected]
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I can forward it to my manager for review. I am looking forward to hearing good news from you and can’t wait to welcome you as my colleague. Warm Regards,
Hninn
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Hinn
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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