Some people are happy to spend their whole life living in the same area. Others prefer to live in many different places in their lifetime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some
people
say that people
should saty
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stay
say
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in a
a
same Correct article usage
the
area
to get more happiness, however
there are others who love to live in a lot of Add a comma
,however
kind
of places Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
within
their life. Change preposition
in
Hence
, this
essay aims to elaborate on disccus
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discuss
about
the aforementioned, and I describe my point of view.
On the one hand, some Change preposition
of
people
who had gotten some advantages from their residents
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resident's
residents'
area
have a likelihood to remain their
living Change preposition
in their
are
. Correct your spelling
area
This
is because,
it is possible to want to return Remove the comma
apply
for
their Change preposition
to
reagion
to contribute Correct your spelling
region
their
residents' business and so on. To illustrate, some of the populace, who continue to live in the same Change preposition
to their
area
, had gotten touch
with their citizens' kindness. In Change preposition
in touch
this
case, people
have a
possibility to decide to keep stay Correct article usage
the
in
there.
Change preposition
apply
On the other hand
, there are people
whose personality
are loving travel, so they may Fix the agreement mistake
personalities
hope
to live a
lot of Change preposition
in a
kind
of places. Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
This
is because, in
these Change preposition
apply
people
, they want to meet new people
or to go new
areas, Change preposition
to new
according to
they are inclined to changing
their environments. Change the form of the verb
change
For example
, there is a fact that some tribes are existing, who are still changing their residents
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resident's
residents'
area
, Fix the agreement mistake
areas
such
as nomads.
From my perspective, as I described before a paragraph, it depends on a persons
personality. Our society has mainly two Change noun form
person's
type
of Change to a plural noun
types
people
, one is prefer
to stayChange the verb form
prefers
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in a
a
same Correct article usage
the
area
, while
others hope
to move. Therefore
, it is a key to get happiness for people
that they should decide their own opinion what
they Correct word choice
and what
hope
.
In conclusion, I reiterate that some people
prefer to stayChange preposition
in a
a
same region Correct article usage
the
according
to contribute Add the preposition
toaccording
for
their local business, Change preposition
to
however
, others are
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apply
also
existing who hope
to change their environments ,because they loves
adventure. Change the verb form
love
Whereas
, I recommend that people
should decide what they hope
to get their satisfaction.Submitted by euler0279 on
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