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Some people say the fashion industry has a bad effect on people’s lives. Do you agree?

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In
this
 modern era, people like to spend a large amount of
money
 on clothes, jewellery and many more items to look beautiful benefits the
fashion
 industry.
While
 some folks concur that the
fashion
 industry has a bad negative influence on people's lifestyles. I tend to stand with the statement that does hold a valid ground which will elaborate in the forthcoming paragraph. There is adequate evidence
that is
 obtainable for substantiated reasons. First of all, the
fashion
 industry is one of the top businesses in the world, with the influence of models and celebrities promoting their products.
Therefore
, individuals tempt to buy
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product
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products
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 which
are
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 telecasted on television and
as a result
, worthless
money
 for invaluable things.
According to
 a recent survey conducted by BBC Channel, more than 73% of folks expenditure budget on unnecessary items. Another factor to consider is that the increasing number of items leads to waste material which is
a
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dire
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 for the environment.
On the other hand
, people give priority to the concept of self-love more than in past years, which indirectly boosts their confidence and mental health by wearing
fashion
 trends. Needless to say, all these points stand in good stead.
To sum up
, I reiterate that
money
 and time are valuable things,
therefore
 utilize
money
 on other resources
such
 as food, the stock market etc. All the aforementioned facts serve as clear evidence that impacts the environment.
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