Some people believe that the society should be based on rules and laws. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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to the

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and regulations is one of the main marks of today's civilization,

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the shape of countries directed by

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and the main benefit of that, but

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the opinions of those who want the opposite. First of all, there is a huge proportion of society

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that being

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disciplined

should

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from human being inside, not being forced by the authorities, if individuals have

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morals and

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good attitude,

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laws

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will become useless, since their behaviours are becoming from their hearts,

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, it should

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not matter if there are cameras on the roads or not, if the driver believes that he should stop when it's red,

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it means nothing if he is being watched or not. In my opinion, regulars should be essential and main part of the shape of

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community today, and

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it to people good

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intention

will lead to many future disasters , because there is no guarantee that the whole people have the same

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and the degree of sticking to them,

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, studies that concern about

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comparing

the degree of following the rules between countries that stick to the

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laws

and others don't, show that

accedents

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accidents

and murders rates are higher in communities with no

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clear

rules. In conclusion, countries should take some serious steps toward

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application, like relying on social media content, billboards in stadiums and

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to make people aware of the

important

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of

appplying

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applying

the rules to protect themselves

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and

the ones they love.