Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

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attitudes in dealing with difficult conditions. On one side, the public prefers to remain in the same situation and
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from
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. On the other side, the brave folk decides to change, destroy and rebuild. I totally agree with the letter approach, believing that
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situation is reformed to better condition if we give it our best owns.
This
essay intends to express my justification. On one hand,
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noticeable proportion of people stick
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safe
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and try to be satisfied
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. Needless to say,
this
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creativity and
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.
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had given up easily and accepted irritation conditions, they have never invented new instruments
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expanded ideas. The world's
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depends on new inventions based on difficult situations.
On the other hand
, the brave community intends to struggle with difficulties to improve more pleasant conditions. They do not scare
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a loser
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,
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they experience more failures to reach success.
For example
, a man who
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hard for shortage salary decides to start a new business and is forced to be creative.
As a result
, he will see some failures and
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. Eventually, he will make his own carrier
according to
his standard.
Consequently
, he helps society in many various fields.
In addition
, he will inspire a lot of people.
To sum up
, when everyone confronts
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unpleasant situations, he can choose to be active or inactive.
Although
I strongly choose the former decision, it can be challenging.
However
, the world needs
this
motivated generation to grow and develop.
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  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
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  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
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