Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?
People have
two margin
attitudes in dealing with difficult conditions. On one side, the public prefers to remain in the same situation and Add a hyphen
two-margin
safe
from Add a missing verb
be safe
hazard
. On the other side, the brave folk decides to change, destroy and rebuild. I totally agree with the letter approach, believing that Fix the agreement mistake
hazards
terrible
situation is reformed to better condition if we give it our best owns. Correct article usage
a terrible
This
essay intends to express my justification.
On one hand, the
noticeable proportion of people stick Correct article usage
a
their
safe Change preposition
to their
surrounding
and try to be satisfied Fix the agreement mistake
surroundings
in contrast
with the true
. Needless to say, Replace the word
truth
this
generation is deprived from
creativity and Change the preposition
of
develop
. Replace the word
development
For instance
, if Add an article
a human
the human
human
had given up easily and accepted irritation conditions, they have never invented new instruments Fix the agreement mistake
humans
and
expanded ideas. The world's Correct word choice
or
developing
depends on new inventions based on difficult situations.
Replace the word
development
On the other hand
, the brave community intends to struggle with difficulties to improve more pleasant conditions. They do not scare be
Fix the infinitive
to be
Add an article
a loser
the loser
loser
, Fix the agreement mistake
losers
while
they experience more failures to reach success. Correct word choice
and
For example
, a man who work
hard for shortage salary decides to start a new business and is forced to be creative. Change the verb form
works
As a result
, he will see some failures and success
. Eventually, he will make his own carrier Fix the agreement mistake
successes
according to
his standard. Consequently
, he helps society in many various fields. In addition
, he will inspire a lot of people.
To sum up
, when everyone confronts with
unpleasant situations, he can choose to be active or inactive. Change preposition
apply
Although
I strongly choose the former decision, it can be challenging. However
, the world needs this
motivated generation to grow and develop.Submitted by ebrahimisara1369 on
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