Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs in order to save money . Write a letter to the local council . In your letter Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre . Explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community . Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to request you rethink your decision to close the sports and leisure centre of my home town.
Firstly
, as a badminton ,player I used to go to the court with my friends. It has been not only a physical activity but entertainment
also
.
Furthermore
, it was our daily routine to go to the centre in the evening and spend time with our friends and families.
However
, It is crucial to encourage sports activities among children and youngsters because healthy and energetic youth would be an asset to future generations. And
also
providing a healthy atmosphere for senior citizens are better for their emotional and mental health
moreover
, their retirement life would be more enjoyable. We would be grateful if you consider our request.
Although
we know that the high expense is one of the reasons for
this
decision, We would like to suggest that make it a membership program. So those who are ready to pay the monthly fees could access the facility Thank you for your consideration Yours faithfully Asha Vijayan
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