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These days, it is easier than ever for people to travel to different places. As a result, many locations that used to be free of tourists have now become popular tourist destinations.

#people #travel #places #locations #tourists #tourist #destinations
The graph shows the amount of cotton tied. And the growth of the markets of various
countries
 by leading
countries
, 5
countries
 between 2004 to 2018 Brazil produced over 5
million
 bales in 2004, compared to Pakistan's
production
 of over 10
million
, India's
production
 of 19
million
, the United
States
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States'
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production
 of nearly 24
million
, and China's
production
 of 30
million
.
In addition
, other
countries
such
 as the United States and India It is evident that at the beginning of
2004
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,2004
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 they had a population of over 20
million
, but that number dropped by almost ten digits.
However
, Indica showed a different picture
at the end
 of the year. jumping from about 10
million
 to more than 20
million
 In conclusion, China stands out remarkably from the rest of the world.
Finally
, China will almost certainly conclude 2018 with statistics that are highly comparable to those provided by India.
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