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Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/she would like your advice about finding a plane to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email Describe where you lived when you were a student at the university. Recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation Warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

#friend #place #course #university #advice #plane #email #student #accommodation #mistakes #students
Dear Neha,
Its
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 a long time
we
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since we
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 had a conversation. I got your email, first of
all
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congratualtions
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congratulations
! I am glad that you got admission
in
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to
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 the same University where o studied. So, I am going to
tekk
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tell
 you about accommodation. When
i
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I
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 was studying
in
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at
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 the University
i
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I
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 lived in part
avanue
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avenue
, it is a PG where
i
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I
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 was living with a
room-mate
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roommate
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. the locality was
awsume
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awesome
 and the rent was 5$
that
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at that
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 time, you have to check the amount once, it may
be change
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. I would suggest
you
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that before reaching there you have to contact
Mr.
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 Rajat, he is
a the
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 owner of the PG and the best thing in the PG,
they
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 will provide you meal.
First
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 you have to
reached
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reach
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at
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apply
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aiport
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airport
then
 you take
auto
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, it will save you money as
compare
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 to
Ubber
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Uber
,
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than
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then
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 you have to reach part
avanue
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avenue
 and meet the owner. Keep in mind, take the room which is
noise free
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, before because they clearly
menstioned
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mentioned
 the category of the room so, choose
noise free
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, lots of students did
this
 mistake in past. Keep in touch
through
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by
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 phone or Email. Your
faithfuly
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faithfully
faithful
 Monika
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