Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/she would like your advice about finding a plane to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email Describe where you lived when you were a student at the university. Recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation Warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

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Dear Neha,
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a long time
we
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since we

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had a conversation. I got your email, first of
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congratualtions
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! I am glad that you got admission
in
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the same University where o studied. So, I am going to
tekk
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tell

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you about accommodation. When
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was studying
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the University
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I

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lived in part
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avenue

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, it is a PG where
i
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was living with a
room-mate
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roommate

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. the locality was
awsume
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awesome

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and the rent was 5$
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at that

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time, you have to check the amount once, it may
be change
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be changing

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. I would suggest
you
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apply

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that before reaching there you have to contact
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Rajat, he is
a the
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owner of the PG and the best thing in the PG,
they
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is they

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will provide you meal.
First
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you have to
reached
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at
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apply

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aiport
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airport

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then
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you take
auto
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, it will save you money as
compare
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compared

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to
Ubber
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Uber

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,
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than
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then

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you have to reach part
avanue
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avenue

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and meet the owner. Keep in mind, take the room which is
noise free
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, before because they clearly
menstioned
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mentioned

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the category of the room so, choose
noise free
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noise-free

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, lots of students did
this
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mistake in past. Keep in touch
through
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by

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phone or Email. Your
faithfuly
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faithfully
faithful

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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