The graph below gives information about the number of cases of diarrhea in Mashhad between 1983 and 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates how many
diarrhea
Change the spelling
diarrhoea
cases
are diagnosed over a period of 9 years in Mashhad.
It’s observed that in the first year, 1983, diarrhea
Change the spelling
diarrhoea
cases
stood at roughly 100 until late 1985. This
was followed by a gradual rise to reach nearly 200 cases
in the middle of 1986, after which it climbed slightly to double the case number
at the beginning of the given period. (200 cases
) However
, this
upward trend was broken and the number
of cases
plummeted tremendously to reach a little under 100 cases
over a period of a year. In 1989, the number
of people with diarrhea
peaked at 400, which is followed by a moderate drop to 350 Change the spelling
diarrhoea
cases
and it levelled off and remained static until late 1991. Ultimately, the number
of cases
saw a sudden plunge to achieve zero people suffering from diarrhea
.
Change the spelling
diarrhoea
Overall
, the number
of people with diarrhea
in Mashhad fluctuated, before it reached zero. Change the spelling
diarrhoea
Besides
, it was at its highest number
in 1989 which was 400 cases
, while
it hit the
lowest pointChange the word
its
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