The graph below gives information about the number of cases of diarrhea in Mashhad between 1983 and 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the number of cases of diarrhea in Mashhad between 1983 and 1992. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates how many
diarrhea
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diarrhoea
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cases
are diagnosed over a period of 9 years in Mashhad. It’s observed that in the first year, 1983,
diarrhea
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diarrhoea
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cases
stood at roughly 100 until late 1985.
This
was followed by a gradual rise to reach nearly 200
cases
in the middle of 1986, after which it climbed slightly to double the case
number
at the beginning of the given period. (200
cases
)
However
,
this
upward trend was broken and the
number
of
cases
plummeted tremendously to reach a little under 100
cases
over a period of a year. In 1989, the
number
of people with
diarrhea
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diarrhoea
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peaked at 400, which is followed by a moderate drop to 350
cases
and it levelled off and remained static until late 1991. Ultimately, the
number
of
cases
saw a sudden plunge to achieve zero people suffering from
diarrhea
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diarrhoea
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.
Overall
, the
number
of people with
diarrhea
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diarrhoea
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in Mashhad fluctuated, before it reached zero.
Besides
, it was at its highest
number
in 1989 which was 400
cases
,
while
it hit
the
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its
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lowest point
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