Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is arguably believed that nowadays

people

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tend to be rather reluctant

of upholding

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long-established

traditions

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, there is a considerable number of

people

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who believe instilling deep-rooted

cultures

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and

traditions

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is vital.

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essay will examine both views dividedly and

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favor of the latter.

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with, Considering the fact

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culture and

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can be fluid and forever changing, it is inevitable to give in to the vanishing of some.

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, it

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appears that in the modern

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people

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don’t appear as willing to preserve

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cultures

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as they used to do ages ago and

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fostering

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of youth culture. Seemingly, the newly established

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developed by new generations hold

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substantial sway over how

traditions

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are rarely kept.

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, the initiating gap between the set of values

people

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are currently undergoing is rather unacceptable and inconvenient to adopt and is potentially raising conflict.

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cultures

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instill an invisible bonding that ties

people

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together,

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and bring

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bring

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brings

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joy, uniformity and harmony to

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’s lives which if eliminated fully, can lay stages for cultural diversity, negligence and division.

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, the annual ceremonies like

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or Christmas

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significant since

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spreads

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limitless joy and

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away despair of the mundane. In my perspective, making

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a realistic

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effort to uphold cultural values and

traditions

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is crucial.

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, exhorting society to stick rigidly to it is questioning

people

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’s

value

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and

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, the entire meaning of tradition falls under question and preserving cultural myths and ancient ethics just for the sake of preserving them will not be promising.

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, even though there are several aspects in which we can all agree is absolutely vital to keep

traditions

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alive, forcefully and prejudicially tying ourselves to them is not the answer

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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

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A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction
Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

295 words

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Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

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Some people believe that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams always succeed in sports. Others think that success in sports depends on mental attitudes. Discuss both views and give your opinions.