An English-speaking friend has written to you to ask you how your studies are going. Write a letter to the friend: tell your friend how you are preparing for the exam. tell him/her how you feel about it. tell him your expectations.

Dear Joziba, How are you? I hope you are doing well.You asked me about my study in

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your letter.Now

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am going to tell you about

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system and my feelings about it.

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, thanks for paying attention to my life.

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with, I have many news

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to my study that

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been increasing.I believe that after

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weeks,I will achieve all my ambitions.Because

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my result is getting better rather than in the past.I feel that my speaking skill is improving day by day .Because, as you recommended

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,I study hard every day to gain my goals.By the way,after two weeks our

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exam will be .So, I am preparing myself hardly .I do all my tasks till 11:00 pm.

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my result is rising fast.And I am glad to know

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that I hope I am ready for

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exam.And I have a lot of agitation and worry about my exam. Thanks

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your consideration and hope good response from your side. Yours sincerely. Rustamova Laylo

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

171 words

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An English-speaking friend has written to you to ask you how your studies are going. Write a letter to the friend: tell your friend how you are preparing for the exam. tell him/her how you feel about it. tell him your expectations.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Many people think that painting and music do not directly improve the quality of people. Therefore, government should not spend too much money on artistic projects. Do you agree or disagree?

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Some countries spend a lot of money on making it easier to use bicycles in cities. Why is this? Is this the best solution to transport problems?

Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary school to university, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?