An English-speaking friend has written to you to ask you how your studies are going. Write a letter to the friend: tell your friend how you are preparing for the exam. tell him/her how you feel about it. tell him your expectations.

Dear Joziba, How are you? I hope you are doing well.You asked me about my study in
last
your letter.Now
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am going to tell you about
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system and my feelings about it.
Firstly
, thanks for paying attention to my life.
To begin
with, I have many news
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to my study that
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been increasing.I believe that after
few
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weeks,I will achieve all my ambitions.Because
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my result is getting better rather than in the past.I feel that my speaking skill is improving day by day .Because, as you recommended
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,I study hard every day to gain my goals.By the way,after two weeks our
english
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exam will be .So, I am preparing myself hardly .I do all my tasks till 11:00 pm.
For
this
reason
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my result is rising fast.And I am glad to know
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that I hope I am ready for
this
exam.And I have a lot of agitation and worry about my exam. Thanks
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for
your consideration and hope good response from your side. Yours sincerely. Rustamova Laylo
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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