Nowadays, an increasing number of people with health problems are using alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their normal doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Medical sectors are always considered to be a major phenomenon, in which methods of curing are usually important issues that draw great attention from publicity.

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many

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still feel

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to new medical innovations, I strongly support the positive

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that more and more

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are choosing

alternative

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medicines and

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. On the one hand, many

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argue that using

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medical medicines and

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has a range of underlying problems.

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,

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need to face many health risks because of

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medical products and

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. Specifically, when knowing the increase in demand

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alternative

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medical methods, there are more and more

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and organizations trying to open new medical

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without any prestigious verification for quality.

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, if patients use these, their health conditions may be extremely worse. Even that, I think all the problems above can be definitely tackled if governments make more tough and close policies to control medical sectors.

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, advocates of the view that the increasing number of patients using

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medical products and

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is a positive

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have some key rationales. First and foremost,

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can help patients be more flexible to choose appropriate medical

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that suit them based on personal conditions and circumstances. To be more specific, many areas now face

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of medical infrastructure, which means that a lot of

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cannot approach suitable medical

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that they want.

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, if

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have more choices of medical

treatments

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, they can have more suitable and better treatment methods and quality.

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,

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can be a vital incentive for the development of the medical technology sector, which becomes

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popular in the

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pandemic period. Personally, I suppose that the development of medical technology provides human life with a multitude of benefits. Based on the aforementioned apparent advantages of the

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, I believe it is rational to encourage

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to use more

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medicines and

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. In conclusion,

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there are still some side effects, the

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of using more

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medical products and

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is beneficial to

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.

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, I consider that

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deserves attention and support from publicity.