Nowadays, an increasing number of people with health problems are using alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their normal doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Medical sectors are always considered to be a major phenomenon, in which methods of curing are usually important issues that draw great attention from publicity.

While

many

people

still feel

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resistant

to new medical innovations, I strongly support the positive

trend

that more and more

individuals

are choosing

alternative

medicines and

treatments

. On the one hand, many

individuals

argue that using

alternative

medical medicines and

treatments

has a range of underlying problems.

Firstly

,

people

need to face many health risks because of

low quality

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medical products and

services

. Specifically, when knowing the increase in demand

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alternative

medical methods, there are more and more

individuals

and organizations trying to open new medical

services

without any prestigious verification for quality.

As a result

, if patients use these, their health conditions may be extremely worse. Even that, I think all the problems above can be definitely tackled if governments make more tough and close policies to control medical sectors.

On the other hand

, advocates of the view that the increasing number of patients using

alternative

medical products and

services

is a positive

trend

have some key rationales. First and foremost,

this

trend

can help patients be more flexible to choose appropriate medical

services

that suit them based on personal conditions and circumstances. To be more specific, many areas now face

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of medical infrastructure, which means that a lot of

individuals

cannot approach suitable medical

services

that they want.

Therefore

, if

people

have more choices of medical

treatments

, they can have more suitable and better treatment methods and quality.

In addition

to

this

,

this

trend

can be a vital incentive for the development of the medical technology sector, which becomes

espeacially

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especially

popular in the

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pandemic period. Personally, I suppose that the development of medical technology provides human life with a multitude of benefits. Based on the aforementioned apparent advantages of the

trend

, I believe it is rational to encourage

people

to use more

alternative

medicines and

treatments

. In conclusion,

although

there are still some side effects, the

trend

of using more

alternative

medical products and

services

is beneficial to

individuals

.

Therefore

, I consider that

this

trend

deserves attention and support from publicity.