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The number of children that read books for fun has dropped dramatically in recent years. What are the reason for this? How can we encourage children to read more?

#children #books #fun #years #reason
It is undeniable that
children
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 reading skills are essential to their success in school, work, and life in general. The statistics of youngsters that read
books
 for
fun
has
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 striking decline, because of the invention of
internet
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.
This
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elarobate
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elaborate
the
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 reason and give my own point of view
how
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 to encourage them to read more. Nowadays, the
numbers
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 of
children
 who read
books
 are shrinking,
due to
 the advancement of technology, which is the invention of the
internet
. Numerous
children
 prefer to stay
in
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 the
internet
 watching videos on youtube, playing games, and using other applications rather than reading.
The modern
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 technology
are
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 so
addicted
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 that they glued the
youngters
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youngsters
infront
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in front
 of computer and smartphones for hours
instead
 of reading
books
 . The
internet
 is the main reason why
the
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children
 have no
time
 in reading
books
. People around them can motivate reading like
parents
 and guardians because they are the people who are with them most of the
time
. The
parents
 and guardians should limit
time
 screen to their
child
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children
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hence
allow
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 them to read
books
 in their spare
time
,
furthermore
 read
books
 with the child to make it more
fun
 and entertaining
as well as
 provide bonding between
parents
 and child. Reading
books
 with the
children
 will encourage them to read,
morever
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moreover
 make it as routine and day by day they will surely engage into reading. In conclusion,
internet
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 is the reason why the statistics of
children
 reading
books
 for
fun
decrease
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 recently,and
parents
 and guardians should limit screen
time
to
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for
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the
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children
moreover
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and moreover
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 read with them to make it
fun
everytime
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every time
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 and to motivate them to read more.
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