The number of children that read books for fun has dropped dramatically in recent years. What are the reason for this? How can we encourage children to read more?

It is undeniable that
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reading skills are essential to their success in school, work, and life in general. The statistics of youngsters that read
books
for
fun
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striking decline, because of the invention of
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the internet
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.
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reason and give my own point of view
how
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to encourage them to read more. Nowadays, the
numbers
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of
children
who read
books
are shrinking,
due to
the advancement of technology, which is the invention of the
internet
. Numerous
children
prefer to stay
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the
internet
watching videos on youtube, playing games, and using other applications rather than reading.
The modern
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technology
are
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so
addicted
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that they glued the
youngters
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youngsters
infront
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in front
of computer and smartphones for hours
instead
of reading
books
. The
internet
is the main reason why
the
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children
have no
time
in reading
books
. People around them can motivate reading like
parents
and guardians because they are the people who are with them most of the
time
. The
parents
and guardians should limit
time
screen to their
child
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children
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hence
allow
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them to read
books
in their spare
time
,
furthermore
read
books
with the child to make it more
fun
and entertaining
as well as
provide bonding between
parents
and child. Reading
books
with the
children
will encourage them to read,
morever
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moreover
make it as routine and day by day they will surely engage into reading. In conclusion,
internet
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is the reason why the statistics of
children
reading
books
for
fun
decrease
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recently,and
parents
and guardians should limit screen
time
to
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the
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children
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and moreover
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read with them to make it
fun
everytime
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and to motivate them to read more.
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